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Boris Feigin's avatar

Nice one! Although I kept feeling like there should be anothrer twist at the end, like laying with her has some negative consequences for the guy, hence why people and beings in the know are not willing to do this :P

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Chris Grey's avatar

I thought about something like that, but I needed to keep it PG-13 or so for where I originally posted it. I have thought about continuing it as a light erotica piece. I even had an idea for there to be an emergency, and he has to wield an intelligent supersword coded to the DNA of Centrions. It basically forces him to fight, though he would command it with his thoughts….[[|:-)

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Boris Feigin's avatar

Ah, good point:) Definitely interesting idea, too:)

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